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I don't know why I'm posting in there anymore, honestly. It's something I feel compelled by, I guess.

Reading the comic now, Screwy. First suggestion though, none of these characters are actually speaking to each other. They're all spouting off these aphoristic phrases on how to improve the world. I like the idea you have here and I'm sure it would translate better with the artwork intact, but there's absolutely no subtlety to the dialogue. Perhaps it's intentional, but it's coming off as heavy-handed.
 
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