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Old 09-22-2001, 08:33 PM   #1
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My song

Hey guys...I'm a songwriter like Bono, but unlike him, I don't have anyone to share my songs with! (He's got tons!) Anyway, could you guys tell me how you like my song? PLEASE! It's about the tragedy, and it's called "Innocent Killer."

The jagged edge
The edge of freedom
They tried and tried
To claim our pride
To overthrow
This everlasting kingdom

But now they know, they will never
Take us for granted, pull the lever
We stand together
Together forever

(Chorus)
They stalk the ground and the skies
Innocent killers
12, 16, 18...the numbers keep growing
Knives and guns while blood is flowing
Hate and love keeps growing
Innocent killers

Fear drives pain deep
Hands claw through hot metal
Tears pour from the face of and old woman
Blood covers her while she sleeps
Soaked into black lace

They have one mind
Strife to kill
To be the best
To fly their flag above the rest

(Chorus)
{bridge}
Red blood
White pain
Blue tears
All the same
Stand together forever

It's one against billions
Their chances are nothing
Yet destruction
Over everything
Makes its mark
Those damn innocent killers

(Chorus) times 2
To fade

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Old 09-22-2001, 08:40 PM   #2
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A NEW LITERARY MOVEMENT MUST BE BORN!!!!!!!

lol am I the only one in the world waiting for a new literary movement? *climbs back under rock*

o yeah -- Good lyrics, foadie!!

Geez you have no idea how much I've written in my little career esp. this past week. *flood of inspiration*

Foadie and BonoBaby and I should get together and write sonnets for one another.

I gotta dig up one of my songs and share it. But I'm scared!

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Old 09-22-2001, 09:09 PM   #3
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OOO! Fun! Sonnets!
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Old 09-22-2001, 09:13 PM   #4
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lol I dunno If you've been here long enough to know, but among my main obsessions are

1. Bono's jaw
2. Bono's exceptionally long sleeves
3. Having JT Bono (or any Bono for that matter) in suspenders and puffy shirt (lol possibly tights) write me a sonnet.

That's my goal in life

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Old 09-23-2001, 12:29 PM   #5
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LOL WH! Yeah, Iv'e read about your jaw and long sleeves obsession! Bono's a cutie! But Larry......mmmmmmm. *goes off into Larryland*
Sonnets are so perty, that would be hilarious if Bono did that! Hee hee!
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Old 09-24-2001, 02:57 AM   #6
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LOL WH! Yeah, Iv'e read about your jaw and long sleeves obsession! Bono's a cutie! But Larry......mmmmmmm. *goes off into Larryland*
Sonnets are so perty, that would be hilarious if Bono did that! Hee hee!
I'm still waiting!!!!!!!!

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