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Foadie

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Lightning Voice

Velvet as pearl shimmer
Rough as wood essence
Light; faster, brighter
Darkness; cooler, longer
Petals to caress my cheek
Never again
Wine to touch my lips
If not now, when?

Heart of a rose
Soul of a demon
A shiver; forever, sever
A shudder; lasting, passing
Dream like a nightmare
Music of blood
Life so short, for the good?

Field in imagination
Dancers in the dark
Rain flung from the clouds
Like thought tossed by storm
Like storm tossed from mind
I find no comfort
I?m in permanent bend
A whisper so softly
Can this end?


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The Proud Owner of the ONLY Cardboard Larry!!!

Hallelujah heavens white rose....with tears on her petals, meets Hell's black flower with blood on his thorns.

Salt, sweat, sugar on the asphalt, our hearts littering the topsoil...
Started my rock 'n roll fantasy... I'd sing to you just one more time,
A song for a heart so big,
god wouldn't let it live,
On sleepless roads the sleepless go. ~Jimmy Eat World
 
That's excellent

You have a gift as a writer-your Larry story was quite good too
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Originally posted by Foadie:
Do you like?

Yes
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Wow, those are some really *can't find the right adjective; something along the lines of interesting in a good way* sensations...I like imagining what "velvet as pearl shimmer" looks and feels like
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Lord Caversham: Why don't you try to do something useful in life?
Lord Goring: I am far too young.
Lord Caversham: I hate this affectation of youth, sir. It is a great deal too prevalent nowadays.
Lord Goring: Youth isn't affectation. Youth is an art.
 
Wow!!

I can hear a song coming up!!!


*Runs to get Geetar*

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"PLEBA Mansion Bootler"

"Lemons, the chicks- they love the lemon"
-Bono in Rotterdam-

"Proud member of the U2 gender"

[This message has been edited by Lemonboy (edited 05-07-2002).]
 
I LIKE!!

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When you stop taking chances and stay where you sit you won't live any longer but it'll feel like it!
 
very nice foadie...i think we have a poet laurette (sp?) on our hands...

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Official Town Crier of Willyville

Laura: Dad, don't forget that you'll have to take mom home.
Dad: Well, Laura...y'know your mother...she's all that you can't leave behind...
 
Foadie! I just found your poem and it's lovely! You know what they said about Charlotte the spider at the end of the movie, that it's not often you find someone who is both a good writer and a good friend, and she was both? Well you are both!
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I've seen his baby blue eyes in the freeze frame so many times I feel like I'm his very best friend~~~~
 
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