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Old 03-29-2002, 10:09 AM   #1
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I just wrote my first U2 story!

Ok so this is my first U2 story.

It was a boring Friday evening and Adam was reading the newspaper, while the lads were playing.
Adam: Hey guys. I just found this article. Listen!
Larry: What's up again?
Adam: A new jazz club opening tonight. We should go and check it.
Bono: Woah man I don't really like jazz.
Adam: Oh c'mon it won't be worse than a Radiohead concert.
Edge: Ok, well what about inviting PLEBA girls?
Larry: Good idea, I call them.

*Meanwhile at PLEBA mansion*
MG: I'm boooooooring!!!!!!Why does Larry always go to these rehearsals?
Jem: Me too!
*Phone rings*
MG: Oh I'm saved. *excited* Something's happening.
Ana: I'll answer *on phone* Hello…Ah Larry! How are ya…A new club?… Well I haven't heard about it…Tonight…Um anything special…ok…sure. Yeah…. Ok…. In an hour. Bye. *Hangs up*. Hey girls. The boys invited us to a new jazz club. Would you go?
MG: Woo I'd love that. Whose idea was it?
Jem: I guess Adam's. Y'know he loves jazz.
Ana: They'll be here in an hour, so I think we should start getting dressed.
MG: But what am I going to wear. I have no clothes here!
Ana: Don't worry. I lend u one.
*the girls dress up, then the boys arrive*

*doorbell rings*
Lemonboy: *shouting*I'll open it!!! *opens the door and invites the boys inside* The girls will be ready in a minute.
Bono: And you? Come with us.
Lemonboy: Well I would but I don't feel really well, and I'd rather stay here.
Bono: Oh hope you'll be better.

*the girls appear*
Larry: *stares at MG* Wow honey. You look great. Nice dress for a party.
MG: Thanks *kisses Larry*
Edge: Where's Jem? I wanna see Jem right now.
Bono: Reg, relax, relax.
Jem: Who called me?
Edge: It was just me, honey. *Stares* Wow *speechless*
Jem: Ok I know *kisses Edge*
Ana: Hey Bono I'm here. You sexy mofo *kisses Bono*
Bono: Hey you look better than I do…
Adam: *impatient* Ok, so would you mind going?

*They're leaving*
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*At he club they all sit to a table and order some drink. The music is live, and several bands playing*

*Behind the curtain Chrissie a pianist and her brother, John a trumpet player talking*
Chrissie: Wow, a lot of people came here. Do you think they will like our music?
John: I hope so sistah. Well we play famous songs, so I think they'd like it.. What are we going to play first?
Chrissie: I thought of a Miles Davis song.
John: What about 'Bye bye blackbird'?
Chrissie: Ok. It's all right.

*Their performance starts*

Adam: Whoa man it' s Miles Davis! I can't believe. My fav. is the first.
Larry: Christy, do u wanna dance?
MG: Of course. *grins* Wow this is gonna be our first dance as a wife and a husband!
* They go to the dancefloor, and start dancing*
Bono: Hey, Ana what about us?
Ana: *innocent smile* If you want…Or you meant to get married?
Bono: Well, first let's dance, but then…
Jem: Edge, honey, don't you wanna…
Edge: NO!
Adam: Hey man go an dance now!!!
Edge: But I can't *almost cries*
Adam: Everyone can dance, you just have to get the rhythm and move. That's it. You can do it!
Edge: Ok I try.
Adam: Don't try! DO IT!
*Jem and Edge go to dance, Adam lights a cigarette*

*They're having fun, but after two songs they getting tired and they walk back to their table. The band including Chrissie and John walk behind the curtain, and an other band starts to play. *

Bono: Hey, where's Adam?
Jem: I think he's having a good time without us. *points at the curtain where Adam talks with a girl*
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Edge: Where's Jem? I wanna see Jem right now.
Bono: Reg, relax, relax.
LOL!!!

yay, Chrissie!

i can SO picture him doing this, all hopping up and down and excited like an adorable litte puppy dog!


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Ok I continue:
*Meanwhile near the curtain a few minutes earlier*

Adam: Um, hello.
Chrissie: Hello.
Adam: I'm Adam Clayton, and I just wanted to tell you, that…
John: *shouting* Hey, Chrissie, can we go now?
Chrissie: Just a minute. *turns back to Adam* so what did you wanna tell?
Adam: Well, just… what was that song you played first? I guess it was Miles Davis, but which song?
Chrissie: It was 'Bye bye blackbird'
Adam: Oh yeah *laughs* so I loved it, and you played really good.
Chrissie: Thanks. But well, it wasn't me who played the trumpet, so I was just a supporter.
Adam: But you did it well.
Chrissie: *blush* okay, okay thanks.
Adam: Do u want to drink something?
Chrissie: I'm afraid I have to go.
Adam: *disappointed* Oh.
John: *reappearing* Hey, what are you waiting for? C'mon Chrissie!
Chrissie: Ok I've changed my mind. I think I wouldn't go home now.
John: And why?
Chrissie: 'Cause this gentleman invited me to have a drink, and I want to accept this invitation. So that's why.
John: Ok then, I go home.
Chrissie: But without me. Bye!
John: *to Adam* Don't let her drink too much!
Chrissie: JOHNNYBOY!!!!!GO HOME!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!
John: K, bye. *leaves*
Chrissie: *to Adam* ok. So where can we sit down?
Adam: Would you mind if I introduce you to my friends? They sit over there.
Chrissie: No, I don't mind.
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*They walk over to the lads' table*

Adam: Hey, listen everybody! This is Chrissie, the girl who played the piano while you were dancing.
All: Hello!
Chrissie: Hi!
MG: Another Chrissie. I'm Christy too.
Bono: Well, Chrissie nice to meet you. Um, do u know us?
Chrissie: Should I?
Bono: I think so. We're U2.
Chrissie: *grins* No way. It's a joke. Aha you just teased me. Ha-ha.
Larry: No, it' not a joke. We are U2.
Chrissie: Wow I really can't believe. OMG! Is it true?
Bono: Of course, sit here next me.
Ana: *whispers into Bono's ear* I think Adam saw her first, so don't be too friendly honey.
Bono: *whispers back* Hey I just wanted to entertain her. If u don't mind.
Ana: *sarcastic* Okay
Edge: So Chrissie, tell us something about yourself.
Chrissie: ok, about what?
Edge: Anything at all.
Chrissie: Well, I was born, then schools etc. I don't think you're interested in my life.
Larry: You never know. So u play the piano, right?
Chrissie: Yeah, and I can play the guitar a lil bit. You're the drummer, aren't you?
Larry: I am.
Chrissie: Wow, well, I've always dreamt about sitting behind the drumkit and roll.
Larry: You can try it, if you want.
Chrissie: Really?
Larry: Of course. You can come to the studio at any time, just to do a roll.
Chrissie: Wow thanks.
Bono: Well, I'm getting bored here. Maybe b/c I don't really like jazz, and here's jazz only. So can we go now?
Adam: And what about an other club. *looks at Bono* Without jazz.
Larry: Well, I'm getting kinda tired. I think we should go home.
MG: *nods her head*
Adam: Chrissie, do u want to stay here, or u'd rather go home. Or to an other club?
Chrissie: Well…
Bono: Hey guys, you both like jazz. Why don't you just stay here, and talk or whatever?
Chrissie: I totally agree.
Adam: Ok.

*The lads go home, and Chrissie and Adam stay and have an other drink. After talking for more than two hours, they decide to go home*
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*The lads go home, and Chrissie and Adam stay and have an other drink. After talking for more than two hours, they decide to go home*
Very well done, Chrissie!
To be continued? Please!



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Old 03-30-2002, 02:21 AM   #7
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*Adam walks with Chrissie home. They stop at the front door. *

Chrissie: Well, we arrived, I live here.
Adam: Thanks for this…this lovely night.
*Chrissie smiles and look everywhere but Adam. He starts slowly stroking her cheek. Chrissie looks into his eyes and Adam kisses her gently*
Chrissie: *astonished after the very very long kiss* Wow…Well I just can't invite you into the house, b/c my brother's maybe here, and he won't be so happy…so
Adam: Ok, no problem. Then good night. *Thinks: No problem. We can go to my place *laughs inside*
Chrissie: good night.

*Adam goes home. The lads (except Larry-well he's with MG) are watching TV. *

Adam: Hi.
All: Hey.
Bono: Where's Chrissie? Or should we go to sleep mum? *grins evilly*
Adam: Chrissie is at home.
Edge: Hey Adam don't pretend as nothing happened! I can see that smile on your face.
Adam: Ok boys don't be naughty, and curious.
Edge: Why not? Ok I have no time for this. I go to sleep. *leaves*
Bono: So Adam, what happened?
Adam: Nothing special. Just a long kiss.
Bono: Whoa. That's 'nothing special'???
Adam: Well she could have invited me into the house, but his brother was at home, and…
Bono: *astonished* And that's a problem for ya?
Adam: Not for me, but for her. Well next time, man. I go to sleep.
Bono: Ok. Night.

The End

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Well done Chrissie!
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Old 04-01-2002, 07:21 AM   #9
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*The next morning*

Adam: *yawns and drinks coffee*
Bono: *appearing* Morning.
Adam: Morning. Hey, what are your plans for today?
Bono: I don't know yet. Why?
Adam: B/c I thought of visiting Chrissie to finish what we started yesterday. *grins*
Bono: *evil grin* Ooooooooh…Then what r u waiting for? Go.
Adam: Okay. *leaves*

*He arrives at Chrissie's place and rings doorbell*

John: *yawns* Who's that? *opens door*
Adam: I'm Adam Clayton. Remember me?
John: Not really. What do u want?
Adam: Well could I speak to Chrissie?
John: No, I'm afraid. She's not here at the moment.
Adam: And where can I find her?
John: In London.
Adam: *astonished* London?
John: Yeah, she lives there. And she's left this morning.
Adam: Oh. Thanks for the info.
John: Not at all.

*Adam goes back to U2 Mansion*

Bono: So, did u meet her?
Adam: Not really.
Bono: Why? She didn't want to see ya again?
Adam: Ohm, no. She went to London.
Edge: London?
Adam: Yeah she lives there.
Bono: Then…?
Adam: What then. There's no then.
Bono: Don't ya wanna see her again?
Adam: Yeah I would.
Edge: Then go to London.
Adam: But I'll never find her…
Edge: What did you tell me last nite?
Adam: *confused*
Edge: 'Don't try. DO IT'. I suggest the same!
Adam: But how could I find her?
Edge: Check the phone book. Did she mention where does she work?
Adam: I can't remember that far. But it's some kind of bookshop, or library… er…well it was in connection with books.
Bono: Then phone the bookshops, and libraries.
Adam: *dials, on phone* Hello. Could I speak to Chrissie…?
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Adam: *dials, on phone* Hello. Could I speak to Chrissie…?
hey girl, pick up the phone.... or I will

great story, Chrissie



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Okay, I have been waiting to have time read this, but I haven't had any. I finally printed it and will read it offline.

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That was good.

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Ok I'll continue tomorrow...
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Wow Chrissie...for your very first U2 story this is very good! Keep up the good work. Oh and I'm working on making a story with you and Adam together since AM is ok with this! LOL Can't wait to read the rest!

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Oh and I'm working on making a story with you and Adam together since AM is ok with this!

Wooooooooooooooooooo HOOOOOOOOOOOOO *dances around the room*
Thanks Jem
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*After phoning for an hour Adam finish*

Bono: Now, did you find her?
Adam: Unfortunately no. Nobody wanted to give me the right information.
Bono: Then you have to go and visit all the bookshops.
Edge: And don't forget about the libraries. *grins*
Adam: *sarcastic* Thanks man.
Bono: *smiles* Don't worry we'll help you.
Edge: *astonished* Really????
Bono: Of course.
Adam: But what should I say her? 'Um, hi I wanna finish what we started yesterday.' This isn't sound very well.
Bono: Yeah. What about this: 'Hey I've been searching for u for hours, don't I deserve a dinner?' Then she: 'You definitely do.' Then you go, have dinner, and you bring her home and then she's going to invite you to have a drink, and then you accept. That's it.
Adam: But…
Edge: There's no but.
Adam: But what if she doesn't want to have dinner with me?
Bono: No way. I won't let her refuse your invitation.
Edge: Yeah if necessary we kidnap her. *evil grin* (Ohm no. Edge can't grin evilly&#61514
Adam: *grins* Thakx, but well don't be so cruel.
Bono: Maybe PLEBA girls will help us too.
Edge: Yeah I call them. *on phone* Hi Jem…Oh I recognised you voice…Oh I love you too…
Bono: *impatient* EDGEEEEE.
Edge: Okay, so Adam is going to search Chrissie…Oh it's too long to tell, but listen. We'll go to London, and would u like to come with us?…Fine, so meet at the airport. K…bye honey.
Adam: So?
Edge: Yeah, they wanna come.
Adam: Then hurry up guys. We don't have the whole day.

*They go to the airport, and meet the PLEBA girls*
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Adam: But what if she doesn't want to have dinner with me?
I can't believe I wrote it down!
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*Larry and MG are there too*

Bono: Hey, what r u doing here?
Larry: Well Ana called us and asked if we wanna come. And I said yes of course. But what's this with Chrissie?
Jem: Yeah Edge didn't wanna tell, so????
Adam: So I went to Chrissie but she wasn't at home, and her brother said that she was in London. Then we thought of looking for her, and I called bookshops and libraries but they didn't wanna tell infos.
Ana: *confused* Libraries and bookshops? Why?
Adam: B/C she's working with books, so…
Jem: And why don't you ask her brother?
Edge: *meditate* Yeah why????
Adam: Well he wasn't very kind and I didn't want to disturb him again.
Ana: But that would be much easier…*rolls eyes*

*They take off and go to London*

*In London*

Edge: So where should we start?
Adam: Well I brought the telephone book, and what about sharing the streets?
Bono: Ok, I go with Ana.
Adam: I don't mind, then Larry and MG, and Edge with Jem. So here are the addresses *writes down the addresses and gives to each groups* Meet at the Hyde Park Corner at 1 PM, and if anyone find Chrissie phone the others, and me of course.
Adam: Ok don't worry, but let's start.
Larry: Is it some kind of race, called ' Who can find Chrissie sooner? '
All: *roll eyes*

*They are scattered in the city*

*Bono goes into a shop*
Bono: Hi is Chrissie here?
Assistant: Yeah, *loud* Chrissie!!!

*A big (a very big) boy in leather, with piercings in his nose and ears and even in his eyebrows appears*

Chrissie: *in a deep voice* Whadda ya want?
Bono: Um, uh well I'm looking for a girl, called Chrissie.
Chrissie: *threaten* Hey, you said I'm like a girl?
Bono: Oh nooooooooo, you're so manly *draws back to the door*
Chrissie: Hey, you're Bono, aren't ya? From y'know U2.
Bono: Yeah I am.
Chrissie: Could I have an autograph?
Bono: Sure *signs on a sheet of paper*
Chrissie: Thanks *hugs Bono-or almost kills him*

*Bono walks out of the shop, breathing hard*

Ana: What happened to ya? You look like…
Bono: Uh don't tell me.
Ana: Was she there? *points at the shop*
Bono: NOOOO. But I learned that sometimes fame can save your life.
Ana: *confused*
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LOL@ Bono....hey Chrissie good job girlie *can't wait to read the rest*
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*Meanwhile Larry and MG go into a shop*

MG: Hi, we're looking for a girl called Chrissie. Is she working here?
Assistant: I'm afraid no.
Larry: *reading a book* Hey I know this book.
MG: What's that?
Larry: *laughs while reading* FOAD it's hilarious. Um this is Stephen King's The shining.
MG: Oh that's a scary book.
Larry: Yeah I know but… whoa it's fantastic.
MG: Well honey I don't want to disturb you but we should go.
Larry: No way I buy this.
MG: Ok

*Larry pays and they walk in the street. Larry is reading loud*

Larry: And then Danny went into the room… The woman in the bath was dead. Her skin was white and it seemed she's smiling. Danny was standing in front of her and suddenly she stood up, and tried to strangle him.
MG: Shut up, I hate these kinds of stories.
Larry: But why? I just wanted to make you frightened.
MG: *sarcastic* Oh thanks very much.
Larry: Ok I stop it. * opens book and reads* And then the man sliced down Halloran's feet.
MG: *gets the book and throws it into a rubbish bin* So
Larry: My book!
MG: I'm sure you won't miss it.
Larry: Aha.

*Meanwhile Jem and Edge walk in the street*
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