Drowning Man - Chapter Six

[Reggo]

Next chapter tomorrow ............... please..................

Why not today?

And in the end
The love you take
Is equal to the love
You make

Lyrics copyright Lennon, McCartney, Harrison, and Starkey

Side note: This actually isn't the end. Two more chapters to go.

 

[mysterious_jen]

oh my god



i had to stop halfway through i had so many tears.

 

[last unicorn]

Oh my God.

This is so cruel. So dramatic.

 

[Alisaura]

 

[edurban]

 

[ALass4Larry]

Wow.......Speechless

 

[zuropa_fit]

mmm...

I don't know what to say...

 

[Reggo]

I'm combining chapters 7 & 8 into one and posting tomorrow.

 

[Pamelakellett]

Gosh, that was well written but horrible to read! You really expressed it so well.

I hope this isn`t the end of this story - there has got to be a happy ending

 

[zuropa_fit]

Gosh, that was well written but horrible to read! You really expressed it so well.

I hope this isn`t the end of this story - there has got to be a happy ending

How on earth can there be a happy ending to this??? How 'bout just a 'nobody else dies' ending? Love the story, F. I know what you mean Pam; it was almost hard to read, so much pain.

 

[Reggo]

Bumpity bump bump.

Ohai. Rewrite chapter posted tomorrow or Thursday Just a heads-up there.

 

[Reggo]

Chapter Updated.

 

[Alisaura]

Chapter Updated.

Oooh, twisty.

 

[Reggo]

Hai guys. And thanks Ali

So I've got this rewrite pretty much figured out except for a few minor things. And there's...7, maybe eight, more chapters after I redo chapter 7. Not sure about setting another deadline for myself so I'll probably just post them as they come.

 

[ali26]

i hope there is a happy ending.