The first few lines from the New Diaries methinks>>>
Summary first: (for those of you who haven't read it before).
Susan is an awkward, shy fifteen year old when we first meet her. She feels inadequate, ugly and very self conscious. Hidden away in some grey English village, she grows up where everyone is old, where they’re always complaining and are very rigid in their ways and beliefs.
Bullied at school, cowed by her father's violence and mother's apparent indifference she sees her life mapped out for her until one Saturday morning her life takes a totally unexpected turn.
For Rowan, aged twenty five, life also takes on a new direction. Up until now he's been on the road with three of his friends and their adoptive mother figure, Elsie, simply taking life as it comes, meeting life's interesting characters and making new friends along the way.
But then one day, he utters eighteen words to a nervous, shy fifteen year old; a fifteen year old who looks only twelve and so begins a journey of discovery and need, of gentle awakening and finally escape but there's a shadow on the horizon. A dark, ominous shadow, feeding, plotting, waiting.......
Ok, first few lines then. Oh and well, the names have been changed from the original but well, all I'm saying is that I'm a Joshua Tree Bono lover so you can draw your conclusions over who the hero is based on.
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Author Youvedonewhat?
I am fifteen.
I don’t look fifteen; more like twelve.
I live with my parents. They had me when they were quite old. ‘A Surprise’, they said or was I ‘A Mistake’? Anyway, mother almost died in childbirth. Not that she would tell me this. Instead, I found out purely by accident; a deliberate accident by a twisted old fart who lives in my village.
I often wondered why she looked at me in that way, with her old lady beady black eyes that would be narrowed to pin pricks behind her glasses. When I walked past her she’d often fold her arms across her wizened old chest and exhale loudly, making known her dislike of me. Sometimes she’d mumble something when I was within earshot; mumbled but said loud enough for me to hear. ‘However did such a sweet girl give birth to one as ugly as you? God must have been looking the other way when you came out’.
When I was younger I didn’t realize what this meant. In my ignorance I used to smile at her but she’d just turn away and shamble back up her overgrown path and shut her front door whilst I looked on. So I never knew until later that mother had almost departed this world because of me. The crab made sure she told me in another of her muttered sentences; ‘Nearly died, she did. When you came out, she nearly died’.
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My parents are very strict.
I can’t wear make up. I can’t wear nice clothes. Even my school uniform is ancient; hideous pleated skirt, white shirt and tie. ‘Yer mustn’t forget yer tie. A decent sized knot. No, not like that; do it again.’ And I have to wear white knee socks whilst all the other girls are in tights and instead of those nice shoes that the other girls wear, I have heavy black shoes with laces; great thick, flat, square things that they buy from Clarks. ‘Yer need a good, strong, well lastin’ pair o’ shoes, not them flimsy things the others wear; wi’ their fancy ‘eels an’ buckles! They’re shoes made for tarts! An’ make sure they last a whole year. Yer’ll not be gettin’ any more!’ And as an after thought when I’d hoped I’d made good my escape; fathers voice following me up the stairs; 'An’ make sure yer clean ‘em well. I want to see me face in ‘em.’ The shoes are the only things I have that are new. Everything else I have is at least second hand; someone else’s cast off; a reject.
Like me.
Ok that's it.
I'll post properly shortly.