Yesterday - Today

brettig · 06-20-2001, 12:20 PM

Alot can happen in a year
or less
people come and go
empires rise
to fall
When there is nothing to confess

The Shambolic balance has been maintained
strips torn but happiness retained
till there is nothing left to see

I saw it all.

These things confuse, mangle and wane
till theres nothing left but a cycle of strain

The noble ideal was grand and great but what is left now?
Nothing but a furrowed brow.

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Im Still very meagre with my thoughts and skills...

zooropamanda · 06-20-2001, 08:18 PM

betty!!
you should share more with us!!
that was very powerful

your skills meagre? I think not

The Wanderer · 06-21-2001, 01:19 AM

yes, I told you to post some of your writing

idealism may be the hardest thing in the world to hold on to

brettig · 06-21-2001, 01:26 AM

For dear life.

Salome · 06-21-2001, 12:11 PM

very nice

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

foray · 06-23-2001, 10:21 AM

Grand, brettig

foray.

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Isn't Love thy neighbour in the global village so inconvenient? GOD writes us these lines but we have to sing them. Take them to the top of the charts but its not what the radio is playing. Is it ? I know.

BabyGrace · 06-27-2001, 12:50 PM

agreed, you should post more.

and your skills seem fine to me..great brettig

06-20-2001, 12:20 PM	#1
brettig New Yorker Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: heehee, ask george Posts: 3,194 Local Time: 12:11 AM	Yesterday - Today Alot can happen in a year or less people come and go empires rise to fall When there is nothing to confess The Shambolic balance has been maintained strips torn but happiness retained till there is nothing left to see I saw it all. These things confuse, mangle and wane till theres nothing left but a cycle of strain The noble ideal was grand and great but what is left now? Nothing but a furrowed brow. -------------------- Im Still very meagre with my thoughts and skills... __________________

06-20-2001, 08:18 PM	#2
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 03:11 PM	betty!! you should share more with us!! that was very powerful your skills meagre? I think not __________________

06-27-2001, 12:50 PM	#7
BabyGrace Refugee Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: even NJ loves NY Posts: 2,095 Local Time: 12:11 AM	agreed, you should post more. and your skills seem fine to me..great brettig __________________

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06-21-2001, 01:19 AM	#3
The Wanderer Kid A Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Holy Roman Empire Posts: 5,271 Local Time: 12:11 AM	yes, I told you to post some of your writing idealism may be the hardest thing in the world to hold on to

06-21-2001, 01:26 AM	#4
brettig New Yorker Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: heehee, ask george Posts: 3,194 Local Time: 12:11 AM	For dear life.

06-21-2001, 12:11 PM	#5
Salome you are what you is Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Netherlands Posts: 22,068 Local Time: 07:11 AM	very nice ------------------ Salome Shake it, shake it, shake it

06-23-2001, 10:21 AM	#6
foray Rock n' Roll Doggie Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: full of sound and fury Posts: 3,386 Local Time: 06:11 PM	Grand, brettig foray. ------------------ Isn't Love thy neighbour in the global village so inconvenient? GOD writes us these lines but we have to sing them. Take them to the top of the charts but its not what the radio is playing. Is it ? I know.