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Old 07-05-2001, 10:23 PM   #1
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Willow Tree and Ocean Breeze

Night falls upon me
A tear down my face the feeling is cold
Fear is well known and persistent
Dreams upon me are less then bold.

Time, a measure of experience
Come visions of my life
A world corrupted past rectitude
Tension cannot be butchered with a knife.

Antiquated man sitting by a tree
The world befriended him
The world in his eyes will never be
A brighter day never to be seen.

Child by the ocean
Delight is but a parents span
Untainted eyes look upon life's optimistic motion
Child ready for life's pilgrimage.

Tear falls from old
Tear falls from young
One from pain and regret
the other from a song yet to be sung.
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Old 07-06-2001, 01:34 AM   #2
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Quote:
Originally posted by Brandon:

Tear falls from old
Tear falls from young
One from pain and regret
the other from a song yet to be sung.
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I love this bit.

Very nice Brandon...

now you go ahead and sing that song, and I'll join in



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Old 07-06-2001, 02:34 AM   #3
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This is the best thing you've posted here so far Brandon.

Those last 2 stanzas are great!

Im with ImnotyourBebe, your turn for singing, Brando
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Old 07-12-2001, 02:00 AM   #4
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wow Brandon! i think ZooManda's right..

glad to see ya postin again, you write quite beautifully

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