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Old 06-08-2002, 04:08 PM   #1
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Wicked shy me

Hi eveyone...I'm incredibly shy to share my poetry, but I've been writing as long as I can remember and I really want to share! I know Mona and a few others have read my poems. Okay..I guess I'll do it. *gulp*

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How much can you cover?
How much can one quench?
Whispers can burn down buildings
Screams can mend a broken heart
Fame is all that glitters, they say
Well, I donít think that way
You speak from inside a bottle
Sing from the end of a short stick
Help thousands in need
What a wonderful deed!
They help themselves, really
Grow flowers in his basement
To use in her attic

Fame is all that glitters, they say
It just may
Bringing lost things together
To wait forever
I thought I was beyond that
But really, nobody is
Somehow weíll all glitter
Itís you for your day.
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Old 06-08-2002, 04:58 PM   #2
 
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How much can you cover?
How much can one quench?
Whispers can burn down buildings
Screams can mend a broken heart
Fame is all that glitters, they say
Well, I donít think that way


They help themselves, really
Grow flowers in his basement
To use in her attic


I thought I was beyond that
But really, nobody is
Somehow weíll all glitter
Itís you for your day


really like the style and thought behind this poem..look forward to more

no need to be to shy around this place they're a great bunch..I spent a fair few months under that mentality and since I started posting I even got around to putting a link up for something I'd written musically which was a first for me considering that side of what I write never reallys sees the light of day
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Old 06-08-2002, 07:49 PM   #3
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yeah we're not all that scary, just a few of us you have to watch out for

this is great, the message is wonderful and you got it across beautifully with some really cool imagery. welcome to the Corner, we're glad to have you!
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Old 06-08-2002, 11:21 PM   #4
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Thanks guys! Grace, you're from Jersey! Cool! I'm a New Yorker.
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Old 06-10-2002, 04:02 AM   #5
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I really really liked this
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