06-08-2002, 04:08 PM
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War Child
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: New York City.
Posts: 934
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Wicked shy me
Hi eveyone...I'm incredibly shy to share my poetry, but I've been writing as long as I can remember and I really want to share! I know Mona and a few others have read my poems. Okay..I guess I'll do it. *gulp*
__________________Spotlight How much can you cover? How much can one quench? Whispers can burn down buildings Screams can mend a broken heart Fame is all that glitters, they say Well, I don’t think that way You speak from inside a bottle Sing from the end of a short stick Help thousands in need What a wonderful deed! They help themselves, really Grow flowers in his basement To use in her attic Fame is all that glitters, they say It just may Bringing lost things together To wait forever I thought I was beyond that But really, nobody is Somehow we’ll all glitter It’s you for your day. |
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06-08-2002, 04:58 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2001
Posts: 2,569
Local Time: 05:09 AM
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How much can you cover?
__________________How much can one quench? Whispers can burn down buildings Screams can mend a broken heart Fame is all that glitters, they say Well, I don’t think that way They help themselves, really Grow flowers in his basement To use in her attic I thought I was beyond that But really, nobody is Somehow we’ll all glitter It’s you for your day really like the style and thought behind this poem..look forward to more  no need to be to shy around this place they're a great bunch..I spent a fair few months under that mentality and since I started posting I even got around to putting a link up for something I'd written musically which was a first for me considering that side of what I write never reallys sees the light of day |
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06-08-2002, 07:49 PM
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Refugee
Join Date: Oct 2000
Location: even NJ loves NY
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yeah we're not all that scary, just a few of us you have to watch out for
 this is great, the message is wonderful and you got it across beautifully with some really cool imagery. welcome to the Corner, we're glad to have you! |
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06-08-2002, 11:21 PM
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War Child
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: New York City.
Posts: 934
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Thanks guys! Grace, you're from Jersey! Cool! I'm a New Yorker.
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06-10-2002, 04:02 AM
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Rock n' Roll Doggie
Join Date: Oct 2001
Location: maze of your imagination, where the streets have no name, lol
Posts: 3,436
Local Time: 09:09 AM
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I really really liked this
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