where i end and you begin

[The Wanderer]

don't remember all the times we had sex, my love
don't remember all the times we didn't fuck, or shouldn't have fucked
up, from bed your body goes off, now it is dark

I've lost your touch to more patient eyes
I've lost sight of everything

and I still feel as though you are everything heavier than ever

I am fragment bone granite
the moment before panic

you were lovely
when you weren't mine


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i never did get this the way i wanted it. doesn't really get to that claustrophobic feel that i was striving for, not that it matters at all...

 

[brettig]

and I still feel as though you are everything heavier than ever

I Want You (She's So Heavy) ?

It feels more weary than claustrophobic to me, but very good.

 

[Blue_Angel]

I've lost your touch to more patient eyes
I've lost sight of everything

i dunno, it felt the stifled to me before I even read what you wrote at the bottom, and im very bad at poetry..

 

[ACROB@T]

you were lovely
when you weren't mine

~*

 

[foray]

I've lost your touch to more patient eyes