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Old 04-15-2009, 06:41 PM   #1
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This is something I wrote a couple months ago...

Beneath the tree by which I rest
Entangled in this wooded breast
The silent sigh the peaceful gasp
The poison leaking from my my wrist

It seeps into the forest floor
This hell you seem to adore
Wound me with your jagged tongue
Make sure all my wires come undone

Toxic venom that you spray
Leave me in silent disarray
The wall you build, the mask again
Run me over, my so called friend

Breathless now with shallow sleep
The poison holds a steady grip
Long after you've since abandoned ship

Shudder and growl

This realization most foul

Return this strength that has been sapped
I am not your muse
You will deny that you abuse
But I know the simple truth

Flesh and bone
Serpent soul



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Old 04-15-2009, 09:20 PM   #2
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It's great, beautiful work.
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