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Old 08-01-2002, 06:06 PM   #1
 
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~..could it burn to care, silent promises graced in intimacy
giving yourself over to a sleep where serenity bathes
where scarlet skin ran cold from a pleasure it never had
forgotten ghosts scattered through river engraved walls
these fountain bled memories blindly flowing
within a blooming weakness unconscious in virginity..
the only place where strength can grow silently..
..scarred blood swept deep in envy over velvet stained veils
drawn across the oceans faded breath carving seamless tears in smoke..
..its misplaced restraints burnt under clouds of ivy
its brandished wind graceful within her soul..
this unintended blossom where silence feared to tread
distant serenity cradled within a woven angel..
laid inside a satin sun cut deep on both sides..
amber burnt wave lashed over~lit by morning wept sand
pulled back into a collapsed night where our faded past lay stolen
moments that bled wrong for the right reasons
when you can say what you want without words
into heart and out of sight
through the clouds in these eyes silhouetted
where lights open hands skim across her silent caresses
shimmering symmetry that steals this broken night
where winter only a faded sleep
tommorow never more than what we dreamt
somewhere untouchable today~a reality bathed in faint stars..
..spread over an eclipsed horizon, its heart tightened under faded breath
a melody lost from its voice, its echo burnt..
night lost within its own shadow, its freedom cherished~
her amber rose lit far away from reality..
his ocean burnt the stars out of the sky
their silent reply hidden in a velvet coil
where love echoed through his soul
as he turned away when she bathed each breath..~
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Old 08-01-2002, 07:58 PM   #2
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Re: unintended

your poems have incredibly striking images acro. i always see a lot of color in them. i love this one. a few of my favorite parts:

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its brandished wind graceful within her soul..
this unintended blossom where silence feared to tread
distant serenity cradled within a woven angel..
laid inside a satin sun cut deep on both sides..
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tommorow never more than what we dreamt
somewhere untouchable today~a reality bathed in faint stars..
..spread over an eclipsed horizon, its heart tightened under faded breath
a melody lost from its voice, its echo burnt..
beautiful job as always.
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Old 08-01-2002, 11:15 PM   #3
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this unintended blossom where silence feared to tread
distant serenity cradled within a woven angel..


reading it all this time made me feel like crying, I don't know why

so beautiful, Paul
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