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Old 06-26-2001, 01:26 AM   #1
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unfinished

writing in the dark
with only his soul to illuminate me
his light
casts a favourable shadow

as i look in the mirror
i see my image bathed in his glow
my true self reflected
for the first time
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Old 06-26-2001, 03:51 AM   #2
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I don't think it's unfinished... I like it.
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Old 06-26-2001, 09:40 PM   #3
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my true self reflected
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Old 07-06-2001, 03:51 AM   #4
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yeah that was a beautiful piece

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