Undone

[Solar Supernova]

undone

a cold day made darker
by the things you should have left alone
the nerve to go on the line
exposed, now your on your own
you lost, and youve been undone.

inside your head you lost before you tried
you left before you even arrived
your your own worst enemy
you wont try again
youve been left undone

never look to the other side
before you look in your mind
its you whos in charge
but its too late, its all gone
your mind is no longer yours
yet your on your own
your undone

tommorow will be worse than today
try and see the light
before your feet have led you away
its still not too late
if you hear me, you still hold your fate
alive, you can circle the sun
and shine
where you wont be left undone

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Just a writing excercise. I havent done this in a very, very long time.

 

[WildHonee]

undone

a cold day made darker
by the things you should have left alone


never look to the other side
before you look in your mind

I like these parts best....this whole thing is SAD (except for the end) but true....it's like you spend so much time concentrating all your time and effort and energy on one thing, one person, one idear, one goal....and then in the process everything else just gets fooked up. That's just part of what I got out of it anyway.:idea:

 

[Sicy]

Very nice but sad Solar * hugs *

 

[ACROB@T]

inside your head you lost before you tried
you left before you even arrived

never look to the other side
before you look in your mind

if you hear me, you still hold your fate
alive, you can circle the sun
and shine
where you wont be left undone

 

[adamswildhoney]

Very nice *HUGS*