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Old 06-17-2002, 05:19 PM   #1
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Normal um.. *taps* is this thing on....

my first time in here. be gentle. or be ruthless. I can take it. and it's a first draft. ok.. at least i know I have 20 min to erase it haha

This had a title but I'm not posting it



My throat opens
as you take me in
your life with no conditions
or questions, and answers
are exposed in your scent.

Your palm is my map
treasures hidden in
your songs and secrets you
long to tell, so eager
I listen

I wonder why you let me
you wonder why I come
we both know nothing
else without each other.
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Old 06-17-2002, 05:21 PM   #2
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wow.

post the title
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Old 06-17-2002, 05:39 PM   #3
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i dont like the title so much. if i think of a better one i'll post it. if i dont erase the thing first. lol.
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Old 06-17-2002, 08:09 PM   #4
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I very much like it! What are you nervous about, it's a good poem.

"your palm is my map"
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Old 06-18-2002, 04:11 AM   #5
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we both know nothing
else without each other.

That's sweet.

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Old 06-18-2002, 07:30 AM   #6
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Old 06-18-2002, 11:57 AM   #7
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Big Grin

I like it!
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Old 06-18-2002, 01:43 PM   #8
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I like veeeeeeeeeeeery much! It is great!
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I wonder why you let me
you wonder why I come
we both know nothing
else without each other
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