trail

[Salome]

I often trail
I know I do
I look ahead and
there
you
are
and wait for me
I want you to

I often fail
don't mind I do
for I try and
ask
you
please
and wait for me
if you want to

I sometimes miss
and often you

 

[Sicy]

Awww, I like that J.

 

[zooropamanda]

When you do post here matey, your words are always so heartfelt and I know they come from somewhere deep inside you.

I really like the way the 2 stanzas merge and create a sense of longing, but at the same time, its like the character has a sense of knowing that his/her faults are accepted anyway.
Maybe Im rambling. Thats just what it made me think.

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

This is really great, Salome.

 

[scatteroflight]

Originally posted by zooropamanda:
When you do post here matey, your words are always so heartfelt and I know they come from somewhere deep inside you.

I second that.

This is so simple and that's why I find it so touching.



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Love was never a single emotion

-ACROB@T

 

[Salome]

you are all very sweet

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

 

[BabyGrace]

that was one of the sweetest poems I've ever read

I think I've said it before, but what you can say so simply is so powerful, and holds so much emotion. I envy your talent..

 

[wannabe]

I enjoyed that. That was a "feel good" poem. Thanks.

 

[ACROB@T]

really lovely Salome

few words that mean so much

[This message has been edited by ACROB@T (edited 02-05-2002).]