toss and turn

[foray]

shall I deny that you ever were
would this lie keep me sane
I would drink the pain again

I would drink the pain to gain
see you everywhere, in every dream
what hurts us most is the unseen

what hurts us most are dreams
most lethal during wakeful hours
what chance at new love to discover?

what chance at new love - I cower
oscillating hurt and hope, there and here

shall I deny that you ever were


(c) foray

 

[brettig]

Here, there and everywhere...

Love that 1st stanza...

 

[zooropamanda]

shots through the heart

heavy, so heavy

 

[scatteroflight]

Very strong. I can so relate to this one, though happily not quite so much right now...



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The soul needs beauty for a soulmate

 

[BabyGrace]

foray, very powerful piece
reminded me a lot of a certain U2 song which I love

thanks for sharing

hold on...
and don't let go of my love...

 

[The Wanderer]

shall I deny that you ever were
would this lie keep me sane

no, either way it torments the soul

 

[Bacchus]

Originally posted by foray:


what hurts us most is the unseen

what hurts us most are dreams
most lethal during wakeful hours

(c) foray

Beautiful words foray, even as painfull as these seem. Cant help but think of Van Morrison:

When the spirit moves you
And it fills you through and through
Every morning and at the break of day
Did ye get healed?
~Did ye Get Healed~

nice to see your works here again..

 

[foray]

Thanks, this one was really fun to make, playing with the structure and all

I'd also like to say that I am inspired by the poems I experience in this corner, so thanks for that.

foray

 

[The_Sweetest_Thing]

Oh Foray..I read it and it makes it hurt right here (circle around my heart)