throw it into the f/ire

[The Wanderer]

"the r/rest of o/ur lives"

angel/angle of the son/sun
whicked d/evil moon
sliced/slivered
turning over/t
going d/own

naked b/lush
adrenaline c/rush

red s/lashes
blue c/flashes

*her arms like water
holding you still
slipping under her waves
drinking your fill*

static plurality
staining salt s/pr/t/ing
in her shallow pool/pull
to her lips you f/cling
motionless tides wading/waiting
dip below/blow

you are living in fan/x/tasy

la(st)ugh until my head/head comes/comes off/off...

here/hear I am allowed/aloud -- any/every/thing all of the tIme

re-Lease me

~all apologies, thom

cut the (k)id in half...

[This message has been edited by The Wanderer (edited 06-16-2001).]

 

[zooropamanda]

I love it

very clever writing

 

[foray]

Clever. This could be a new technique that you could explore and excel in. Would like to see more... Good on ya.

foray