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Old 08-01-2002, 01:02 AM   #1
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this one's different from all my other poems, but......

it's happy for one .....

comfort is a touch when i am down
a hug that covers all my fears
a kind word when hate spreads like wildfire
comfort is love

love is wanting to be close forever
mothing else in the world matters but us
pain goes, hate leaves, tears turn from sorrow to joy
love is joy

joy is the abandoning of all cares
a bright new day full of opportunity
friends with open arms and goofy grins
joy is peace

peace is no more hunger, no more thirst
no more sorrow no more shame or desperatness
everything that should be in this world
peace is all.........
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comfort is a touch when i am down
a hug that covers all my fears
a kind word when hate spreads like wildfire
comfort is love


peace is no more hunger, no more thirst
no more sorrow no more shame or desperatness
everything that should be in this world
peace is all.........
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Old 08-01-2002, 11:18 PM   #3
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beautiful, Stories for Boys

it's so hard to make happy poetry, you did a very good job. and it made me feel good, so you definitely succeeded!
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