The Wall or 'The Wall'?

[brettig]

the irony of speech compared
songs in sequence and story of stutters
they even mentioned the baddest of runners
while berlin's night was floydian shared

In history's epic gaze the smattering of fact
shall wear an irony that laughs at rock
when a wall succeeds in splitting a nation
then causes a great band's fragmentation


Just a little irony that sprung up in chat...

 

[Angela Harlem]

 

[zooropamanda]

Excellent!

'while berlin's night was floydian shared'

Great line

 

[popkidu2]

very nice brettig

haven't seen you around in a while. glad you posted.

 

[The Wanderer]

mother should I build the wall?

send this poem to Roger Waters

 

[bonovista]

David Gilmour would be very proud of you.

Very nice, great lines..

 

[foray]

I don't get it

(how come everyone else did?

)

foray