The Ocean is Blue Today

[Tania]

The ocean is blue today,
Ella Fitzgerald blue
While my thoughts are red,
Blazing bushfire red,
Raging and out of control
No water will stop this baby!
So I stupidly told you of the hurt
Watched your eyes become a blank
And your mind remain ironclad shut
Again

 

[ZeroDude]

Sorry I couldn't stay straight faced during the "No water will stop this baby!" but the rest of it is very nice

 

[RadRacer]

What's so funny
about that line?!
There's nothing funny
about the whole post -
I can't keep a straight face about it all!
I had to laugh
about how not funny it is.

 

[Tania]

Does that mean you like it or hate it?

 

[~BrightestStar~]

Nice

 

[the tourist]

Does that mean you like it or hate it?

Well I can say for sure that I like it.

 

[RadRacer]

*SULTAN enters the door, as usual, wearing nothing but that black slip, the Sultan's hat and the Arabian slippers*

Good, pleasant day, neighbor!
That's right, I'm your new neighbor. I just moved in, yesterday.
I love all slippery poets and feline writers.
Your poem is nice; I love it. For me, it describes my once lost youth. It harkens to it.
I like the metaphors of water, and the many colors - they remind me of the many candies I keep in my treasure chest, for myself.

Keep up the good work!

*SULTAN leaves, happily*