the missing G

[frogbat]

They may look like us
They may move like us
At times they even sound like us..

Hidden in there, between the leaves
Beady eyes filled with tears
In the shadows of the tallest trees
Lookin out in shame

Watch them watch us march on by
Watch them cry

So they watch you my brothers
Putting on a new skin
Deeper than sin
Revealin for all to see
Nationality ideology and creed

Shakin their head they watch us march on by
Shakin their head they watch us live a lie

Though they see they don?t understand
How we bicker for some unholy land
Marching to the tune of a military band
One by one towards our death in honour of our national brand

Turning away to let us march on by
Turning away they let out the longest sigh


p.s title refers to me habit of droppin the g at the end of words endin in ing

p.p.s. dunno if this will be my last post - since it's obvious that certain people have monopolised the forum as their playpen I've decided to stop posting anywhere else - then again it's obvious I won't be missed.

 

[BabyGrace]

your poems really get my mind going.. (which is difficult to do, I might add

)

Though they see they don't understand
How we bicker for some unholy land

*sighs*
you have the coolest perspective in this one

froggie, I'm not gonna beg you but all I'll say is that you can't let people drive you away like that..and don't be silly, of course you'll be missed


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but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

 

[The Wanderer]

*i got electric light, and i got 2nd sight, amazing powers of observation...

for what it's worth, i'll miss you

 

[brettig]

So they watch you my brothers
Putting on a new skin
Deeper than sin
Revealin for all to see
Nationality ideology and creed

Straight to the jugular...as is your trademark

 

[foray]

I'd miss you, froggie.

foray

 

[brettig]

So will a certain special someone who gave u a decent whack on my behalf

 

[Jett]

Hidden in there, between the leaves
Beady eyes filled with tears
In the shadows of the tallest trees
Lookin out in shame

 

[Salome]

ehhh, leaving ?

that can't be right

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it

 

[Kid Achtung]

I have to agree with brettigs point and that its well....you are talented. Great stuff.

 

[missmacphisto]

Awww, you cant leave and let ME run amok!

Oh the horror!

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Look...look what you've done to me...You've made me poor and infamous, and I thank you...

My name is MISS MACPHISTO...I'm tired and i want to go HOME...

"Well you tell...Bonovista,that i said hello and that my codename is Belleview" - Bono before opening night of Anaheim Elevation concert