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Old 04-21-2004, 02:59 PM   #1
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Souls in a Broken Grave

Souls in a broken grave
Heartache in a melody
Solve this life long mystery
Lies that haunt this fate
In faith I hit my knees
To ask forgiveness
For this apathy
It suffocates in desire
Blindness burns the hand
Which turns the key
To unlock our morality
The fires of god
Let my human heart aspire
And I stuff humanity
Into the lifeless men
Who in cities wait
To seal the deed
And lock the gate
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Old 04-22-2004, 05:24 AM   #2
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Wow that is a great poem. Really I like it, how old are you???
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Old 04-22-2004, 06:01 AM   #3
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it depends on the day how old I am ha!! but usually late 20's

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Old 04-22-2004, 10:26 AM   #4
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LoL, well youre welcome. Well Im 15
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15?? you write great poetry.. keep it up
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