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Old 11-16-2002, 03:16 PM   #1
 
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summer lost in winter's eyes
as rain bled from an open wound
her sleeping waterfall
river swept into black roses
ocean collapsed lips
borrowed dream
embroidered butterfly
untouchable silhouette
blindness twisted in the wind
as darkness died upon the light
where love lay upon every fear, and every touch
when her breath blew fire into the night
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Old 11-16-2002, 07:19 PM   #2
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You have such beautiful poetry....
I can't pick out my favorite lines because I love
them all. It feels like I'm swirling away into
whatever world you are thinking about.
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Old 11-17-2002, 03:19 AM   #3
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i want to be an embroidered butterfly....
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Old 11-25-2002, 12:52 PM   #4
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I like this.
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