She Dances

[thane]

Radiant like an angel
Skin like God's only dove

An unconsious smile and persona
that envelopes people in her presence

Brillant, confident and poised
she is in a leauge all her own

Tiny in stature, selflessness, generousity,
consideration make her a giant among
mere mortals

She is loveliness personified, beautiful
as she dances bringing joy to all
who know her.

She dances and she dances well.

Thane Noveau

 

[TheWho4Life]

Very nice
I like it Really.

 

[thane]

umm..thanks.

thane noveau

 

[TheWho4Life]

You don't beleive me? Fine.

 

[thane]

Oh no. I do thank you very much TheWho4Life.

 

[starsgoblue]

No fighting you two!!! I think Thane just has the typical creative tempermant....meaning everything they make they don't think is good so when someone compliments they are not sure what to do with it. I'm totally that way---I can't help it either.

 

[thane]

yes. i didn't know if my work was good or unacceptable.

thane

 

[TheWho4Life]

Oh ok

 

[whitehead]

Very nice!!

First stanza brought to mind the following from "So Cruel" which I love:

"Her skin is pale like God's only dove
Screams like an angel for your love
Then she makes you watch her from above
And you need her like a drug"

 

[thane]

Thanks Whitehead, yes I used a Bono line in there.

Thanks for all the other kind words that were written here from others.

thane