search - my first poem ever

[AcrobatMan]

This poem is a bit inspired ...

I have climbed highest mountain
I have run through the fields
Only to be with you
Only to be with you

I have run
I have crawled
I have scaled these city walls
These city walls
Only to be with you

But I still haven't found what I'm looking for
But I still haven't found what I'm looking for

I have kissed honey lips
Felt the healing in her fingertips
It burned like fire
This burning desire

I have spoke with the tongue of angels
I have held the hand of a devil
It was warm in the night
I was cold as a stone

But I still haven't found what I'm looking for
But I still haven't found what I'm looking for

I believe in the kingdom come
Then all the colors will bleed into one
Bleed into one
Well yes I'm still running

You broke the bonds and you
Loosed the chains
Carried the cross
Of my shame
Of my shame
You know I believed it

But I still haven't found what I'm looking for
But I still haven't found what I'm looking for
But I still haven't found what I'm looking for
But I still haven't found what I'm looking for...

* closes the browser , looks around and runs away ..may be i 'll back someday with a less inspired piece of writing on this forum*

AcrobatMan

 

[Bonochick]

So, did you type all that out or copy and paste?

You should share some original work...I'd be interested in reading it.

 

[AcrobatMan]

So, did you type all that out or copy and paste?

You should share some original work...I'd be interested in reading it.

control C and then control V

 

[sulawesigirl4]

so would that be in the neoclassical style?

 

[AcrobatMan]

so would that be in the neoclassical style?

whats neoclassical

 

[sulawesigirl4]

whats neoclassical

A revival of classical aesthetics and forms

 

[U2002revolution!]

omg, that sounds sooooo familiar....i got it, U2 stole it from you! the nerve!....i think you should sue those bastards U2 for stealing your 'poem'

 

[AcrobatMan]

omg, that sounds sooooo familiar....i got it, U2 stole it from you! the nerve!....i think you should sue those bastards U2 for stealing your 'poem'

yes bono stole it from me. He accepted that later in his song called "The Fly" in Achtung Baby. That settled it