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Old 11-19-2002, 11:35 PM   #1
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grey skirt
over
laps
of
white blizzard

softly penetrate
layers
of
dark
subtle wilderness

heaven scent
lip
of
clouds
moisten God
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Old 11-20-2002, 12:23 AM   #2
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I like it!!!
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Old 11-21-2002, 07:11 PM   #3
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you are such a clever writer
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Old 11-21-2002, 07:49 PM   #4
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thank you.

you're very kind.
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Old 11-21-2002, 08:31 PM   #5
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Old 11-21-2002, 10:11 PM   #6
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i am god

Say, this reminds me of that Bukowski poem I posted weeks ago.

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Old 11-22-2002, 05:37 PM   #7
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in what way??
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Old 11-22-2002, 09:28 PM   #8
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uh-oh did I offend?

Nothing much, really; just that it's erotic and ends God.
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Old 11-22-2002, 09:45 PM   #9
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I must say...I am very impressed by people who can pack so much power into so few words. Very nice.
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