poem #

voxxie · 09-30-2001, 01:07 AM

stand just aside
being just what you know to be
be in the dark
is just the start of my path
gray.............
weak
the tears of the players
hugs just once for all
believe me i used to be here

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

BabyGrace · 09-30-2001, 07:35 PM

damn, voxxie I love your poetry!

stand just aside
being just what you know to be
be in the dark
is just the start of my path

you say in so few words what I can't ever express clearly in a thousand; I'd love to be able to write like you

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but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

zooropamanda · 10-02-2001, 12:50 AM

yes in agreeance with the babG on this one
I love your stuff voxxie, although I dont agree with her not being able to write good stuff..sheesh!

this palce is full if people with no confidence in their writing.

I think we better start having WTWSA meetings

oh and if anyone can guess what that stands for u get a limerick written in your honour

voxxie · 10-02-2001, 08:30 PM

im glad that you like my poetry

!

hey BabyGrace your poetry is great!!

anyone who has the courage of writing from their soul, is a great poet

err what is WTWSA ?

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

zooropamanda · 10-02-2001, 09:46 PM

u dont want to even try for the limerick, voxxie?

sheesh, I thought it was obvious

We Think We Suck Anonymous!

voxxie · 10-03-2001, 06:06 PM

sorry my english is not enough for that challenge

BTW what is a limerick? hehe

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a mexican poet, but not a very good one

09-30-2001, 01:07 AM	#1
voxxie The Fly Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: round there Posts: 133 Local Time: 11:40 PM	poem # stand just aside being just what you know to be be in the dark is just the start of my path gray............. weak the tears of the players hugs just once for all believe me i used to be here ------------------ a mexican poet, but not a very good one __________________

09-30-2001, 07:35 PM	#2
BabyGrace Refugee Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: even NJ loves NY Posts: 2,095 Local Time: 12:40 AM	damn, voxxie I love your poetry! stand just aside being just what you know to be be in the dark is just the start of my path you say in so few words what I can't ever express clearly in a thousand; I'd love to be able to write like you ------------------ but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above... __________________

10-03-2001, 06:06 PM	#6
voxxie The Fly Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: round there Posts: 133 Local Time: 11:40 PM	sorry my english is not enough for that challenge BTW what is a limerick? hehe ------------------ a mexican poet, but not a very good one __________________

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10-02-2001, 12:50 AM	#3
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 03:40 PM	yes in agreeance with the babG on this one I love your stuff voxxie, although I dont agree with her not being able to write good stuff..sheesh! this palce is full if people with no confidence in their writing. I think we better start having WTWSA meetings oh and if anyone can guess what that stands for u get a limerick written in your honour

10-02-2001, 08:30 PM	#4
voxxie The Fly Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: round there Posts: 133 Local Time: 11:40 PM	im glad that you like my poetry ! hey BabyGrace your poetry is great!! anyone who has the courage of writing from their soul, is a great poet err what is WTWSA ? ------------------ a mexican poet, but not a very good one

10-02-2001, 09:46 PM	#5
zooropamanda Rock n' Roll Doggie VIP PASS Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Smile, you're reading my post Posts: 6,515 Local Time: 03:40 PM	u dont want to even try for the limerick, voxxie? sheesh, I thought it was obvious We Think We Suck Anonymous!