One More Day

[uwwedoogie]

Here's a song I wrote, I have a tune in my head, so it might sound a bit off to you, but tell me what you think...




One More Day
I look back and I realise,
I keep asking for just another moment.
I wanna hear your voice, see your eyes.

Come back to me,
I've got time, I wana spend with you,
appreciate your company, for one more day,
I've got see you, before I'm through.

I always felt pure,
and I miss you.
Can you hear what I say?,
Just One More Day.

A took a chance,
I thought i was good, until the second glance,
you were waiting, but i left you go,
and now I can only blame myself.

One More Day,
I've gotta tell you everything,
I've gotta take you everwhere,
And I want to be with you all the time.

I always felt pure,
and I miss you.
Can you hear what I say?,
Just One More Day.

And I'm sorry,
you were waiting and i left you go.

So please, I'm asking you, please,
I'm down on my knees,
begging you, is there anyway?
I can see you for One More Day

Just One More Day

 

[Mullen4Prez]

Good work doogan

 

[the rockin edge]

nice one

 

[For Honor]

Hindsight.......

That's funny, because
"Just like heaven" came on, by the Cure, and I was just going to say that your poem reminded me of that song a little. Or at least, in my mind, there was a connection

"..I opened up my eyes
I found myself alone alone alone upon a raging sea...."


Oh well. Any good work of art generates thoughts from an individual.........

 

[ZeroDude]

Amen, good work Doogie

 

[wizard2c]

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One More Day........{one more night, one more moment in my life}

Very good!

carol
wizard2c