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Old 12-27-2000, 03:25 AM   #1
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Ok - I'll give this a try....

...be gentle please.

I Love You For All the Right Reasons... And All the Wrong One's Too.


Because you're you
Because I'm me needing you.

Because you're stable
And I'm not

Because you're not perfect
Because I like to perfect.

Because you complete my soul
And my soul is incomplete.

Because you fill a father-shaped hole
Because I am mishapen.

Because you're smarter than I
And I like to play dumb.

Because you make me laugh
Because I forget to.

Because you take my pushing
And I like to push.

Because you won't leave
Because sometimes I'd like to.

Because you believe in me
And I don't.

Because you're right
Because I'm always wrong.

Because you take care of me
And I need to be taken care of.

Because you never worry
Because I do.

Because you listen
And I don't shut up.

Because you ease the pain
Because pain comes easy.

Because you love me and I want to love me too.



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Nichelle
**Still looking for the
face I had before the
world was made....**

**Work like you don't
need money, love like
you've never been hurt,
and dance like no
one's watching.**
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Old 12-27-2000, 03:37 AM   #2
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welcome to this part of the forum dancingBarefoot

there's no need to be gentle when people post stuff as good as this
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Old 12-27-2000, 11:26 AM   #3
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yowzers, that was good. That reminded me of an old friend.

And welcome to dream out loud Dancingbarefoot. Can't wait to hear more
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Old 12-27-2000, 11:28 AM   #4
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that is pretty good and should fit nicely with the backstreet boys on their next shit album.

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Old 12-27-2000, 12:00 PM   #5
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so who's had a bad Xmas?

Ignore Rouge - if you can or else he'll drive you nuts!

His reply was actually a compliment we all know how much he enjoys BSBs' music.
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Old 12-27-2000, 12:18 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally posted by DancingBarefoot:

...Because you're stable
And I'm not...

...Because you make me laugh
Because I forget to....

...Because you love me and I want to love me too.
I can really associate with these lines...they remind me of a coach (I know it sounds stupid) that I am really missing right now. This piece is so beautiful! Very well written...Please keep sharing




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Talk without speaking
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Old 12-27-2000, 08:16 PM   #7
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Thanks for not being cruel... well most of you anyway. I've enjoyed reading the other material on this list. I appreciate constructive critisism, so hopefully I'll work up the courage to post again. Thanks again to those who had something nice to say.



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Old 12-28-2000, 08:57 AM   #8
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this is GOOD! keep up the good work...
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