|03-06-2003, 05:43 PM||#1|
Join Date: Feb 2001
Local Time: 10:45 AM
.tainted scars pulled over angel eyes~__________________
when their dream settled gently on the horizon
..beneath autumnís unwanted shadow
snow seeped blindly into the sun
natureís lips caressed her tears as..
the nightís soul slipped into silence
..collapsed under every breath of denial
her ivory flame danced
..over their reflection
where cracked sepia hid where they
as he lost himself under a faded sky
and found himself in her
|03-06-2003, 05:47 PM||#2|
Join Date: Nov 2000
Location: Cherry Lane
Local Time: 12:45 AM
I read the first line, and it's like, damn, that's good...I'm going to quote that specifically in my reply. But then I thought that about every line I read. Beautiful.
"Knight in shining Zubaz."
Bonochick [at] interference.com
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