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Old 03-06-2003, 05:43 PM   #1
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.tainted scars pulled over angel eyes~
when their dream settled gently on the horizon
..beneath autumnís unwanted shadow
snow seeped blindly into the sun
natureís lips caressed her tears as..
the nightís soul slipped into silence
..collapsed under every breath of denial
her ivory flame danced
..over their reflection
where cracked sepia hid where they
once were..
as he lost himself under a faded sky
and found himself in her

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Old 03-06-2003, 05:47 PM   #2
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I read the first line, and it's like, damn, that's good...I'm going to quote that specifically in my reply. But then I thought that about every line I read. Beautiful.
"Knight in shining Zubaz."

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