No 5

[zooropamanda]

*this has major structure problems, but who cares*

I'm lost in this world
of knowing who you are.
You talk over the everyday,
I drown like a movie star.

Blocking out the world with a slam
fashion and laughing high.
We can't get over oursleves,
I'd die to be the lie.

Playing with my mind
I'm finding myself inside.
Falling down scares me,
but hey, what a ride.

looking for the soul,
underneath my soul.
I hide from the attraction,
and the silence takes its toll.

*nah, thats pretty crappy, but Im not deleting it now*

anyone can have the copyright on this one, hehehehee

 

[bicyclingfish]

"I'd die to be the lie"

Zooropamanda, you always write these single, poignant lines that catch my insides, ya know?

I wanna write a poem off this line. Its so much, it can mean so much. I'll write this poem, put it out there, and if I veer off your topic, sorry.

I really like this poem, and I really like this line. Thanks for sending out a great one! -Adam