no. 129

[hiphop]

wrote this sometime a year or two ago.. didn´t work on it until now, wouldn´t put it anywhere otherwise, reluctant to publish, why, there are better ones, well anyway


there´s no questions
no need to ask any
everything is clear like glass
and glass cuts
the scream fades away in the city
sinner, a scream for nothing

go
you did leave, a long time ago
drugs to keep my calm
good, they silence thoughts roll in my head
at times

pain is here to stay
and the game
does not make any sense
passed the past

nobody can hear me
not of uttermost importance
wandered too long with others without soul
felt too much too intense

do not touch, you won´t, you can´t
engulfed by kisses without reason
while war is ravaging
the smoke
of the cigarette
between my sucking lips

© hiphop 2003

 

[wizard2c]

reply

Good writing....

"nobody can hear me
not of uttermost importance
wandered too long with others without soul
felt too much too intense"

Makes sense to me......I'm so angry at myself because I foresaw the future last night but could not hear all the words.....but then I could in no way have changed the outcome of today.

It's like mankind wants to hear the senseless and useless and what is important no one wants to listen to.....perhaps it's the word "death" that they fear....oh I write about how mankind is running out of time........but does any one listen? No....only the trivial........hey Harry Potter is gay......who cares he's a wizard.
Yes, I foresee the future........what do I do with it?........hide it away in my pocket...maybe it's meant to be......."Mother Mary comes to me...speaking words of wisdom......let it be."...right on, Beatles!

Write some more here........anytime.

carol
wizard2c

 

[For Honor]

Yes... let it be........


solid writing there, hiphop

 

[AcrobatMan]

excellent