my philosophe

[bicyclingfish]

my philosophe

you were, you were
my stigma, my stutter
I was the bicycling fish
and you were my lover

we were dreams, dreamers in the dreams
of ten thousand lonely souls
when you watched me I was your TV
and you, my philosophe

now I'm alone
now I'm a waste
now you are my dream
I just want you

she said "sleep, lover, dreamer of mine"
I closed my eyes felt lips of wine
these are days I prefer to be blind,
a blinded stutter who isn't afraid to dream.

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Come on, come on! Be good to me...

 

[BabyGrace]

bicyclingfish, you have such a distinct style. your poetry sounds like lyrics

you were, you were
my stigma, my stutter
I was the bicycling fish
and you were my lover...

she said "sleep, lover, dreamer of mine"
I closed my eyes felt lips of wine
these are days I prefer to be blind,
a blinded stutter who isn't afraid to dream.

these two stanzas are great. Im glad to see you around

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You make yourself vulnerable to change in your life. But in the end, you've got to become the change you want to see in the world.
-the B-man

 

[Ana]

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[zooropamanda]

How did I miss this Adam?!
Long time no see.
I love the way you personify feelings and faults.
You were my stigma, my stutter

Powerful and I just remembered that you are one of the people that makes DOL great.

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I am a cowgirl of funk*

 

[Lemon Baby]

Very cool poem.

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Let her pale light in
To fill up your room

 

[ACROB@T]

I closed my eyes felt lips of wine
these are days I prefer to be blind

 

[The Wanderer]

when you watched me I was your TV

that's a great line. hope to see you around again soon! you seem to disappear and every so often check in with a few new ones, in the meantime...

 

[Stories for Boys]

it's definately a unique style, which i appreciate...sets it apart from other poetry...well done!