"moon lily"

[The Wanderer]

pale white skin
beneath a bluish moon

it shines in her
as it penetrates in waves

she parts her lips
to the nourishing flood

the future's kiss
the delicate meddle

she would like to be a flower
she'll settle for a bloom

rays slide off her skin
she is a lily of the moon

with the darkness around her
and the flaxen stardust powder

you reach to kiss her
with your last breath

the pulsar plume
and solar shower

pulsating nebulous heart,
shivers in kinetic shadow

dying whisper, of
lunar eclipse

 

[BabyGrace]

pulsating nebulous heart,
shivers in kinetic shadow

dying whisper, of
lunar eclipse

you are a writer aren't you?

you have the most beautiful ways of describing the people and life in general around you

 

[zooropamanda]

that he is BabyG

I adore this..

what a gorgeous line
she is the lily of the moon

 

[scatteroflight]

Originally posted by The Wanderer:

dying whisper, of
lunar eclipse

Those are beautiful concluding lines. You HAVE been listening to the Smashing Pumpkins, I think

 

[Achtung_Bebe]

she would like to be a flower
she'll settle for a bloom

rays slide off her skin
she is a lily of the moon


This bit is so beautiful Wanderer.

Very nice

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"If I am close to the music, and you are close to the music, we are close to each other." -Bono

 

[The Wanderer]

thanks ladies

(one of you just passes as a woman, I am told)

well, i always have the Pumpkins nearby, there's a lot of Radiohead in there though, that's actually what I was listening to when I wrote it (a beautiful b-side called "lift" and some of Kid A), also, the cover of the Muse cd inspired it somewhat

sometimes I just get fixated on certain images and music and this is what results

 

[brettig]

pardon for a guy jumping in to enjoy this beauty

 

[zooropamanda]

Originally posted by The Wanderer:
thanks ladies

(one of you just passes as a woman, I am told)

excuse me while I scratch my butt and grunt