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[adamswildhoney]

Guitar star!

Okay! This my first time post a new thread in here and I finally got the courage up to post one of my poems, here it goes:



My Guitar Star:

My guitar star shines so far
shines brighter then any other star
oh why cant I stay with you
to be with you would the sweetest thing
better then anything I ever seen

You act like such a fool so why do I love you
oh how I dream to have you in my arms to
feel your body next to mine would be sweeter then any wine
why cant you come to me and we'd live happily

my guitar star!


This poem is about a guy that I have a crush on. He plays the guitar in a local band!

 

[FallingStar]

It's beauiful. Really.
When I read the peom I couldn't help but was in my mind all the time.

 

[MissVelvetDress_75]

aww..that is a nice poem.

 

[adamswildhoney]

Heres another one!



Sex is good
Sex is bad
Why does it always have to be was
that the best you ever had?
Lust and Desire
Burn like fire in the heart of your Desire
What ever happen to "Lets get it on"
A Peach is a Peach
A Plum is a Plum
So why do you come get some

Sex is bad
Sex is good
A kiss isnt a kiss w/o a tongue
why are on the the run
just come and give me some.

 

[diamond]

WOW.
I sense talent here.

DB9

 

[adamswildhoney]

Im on a roll another!



Right way



Right way
Left way
That way
Which way
Whos to say ur way is the best way
U make my choices for me and I just cant see
the right way

Up there
Down there
Over there
Under there
U say that way I say this way
maybe its time to go our own way
so how come you stay

Is it because thats the right way

 

[FallingStar]

I really love those.

 

[adamswildhoney]

Sunrise

This poem is one of my faves! I still working on it so it might seem a little unfinshed:




Sunrise


Sunrise to meet the future
Sunset greets the past
How much long will this last
I hear the ocean crash beneath me
yet no land to see
Days run into Days
Nights run into Nights
On this endless plight for my life
To grieve would make my heart bleed
Why cant I stay in land of my love

Sunset on the grey past that was
Sunrise on the bright future that will be
How much long until I see what was meant for me
This land of the brave, home of the free
is meant to bring so much oppourtunity
I see now the land of dreams but still
hold the land of Eire in my dreams




This poem is about my grandmas trip to america!

 

[Mike007]

Response to poem

Hey kelly just read your poem, very good indeed, hope you can share more of them with us, hope to hear more from you in the future

Best wishes

Mike007

 

[adamswildhoney]

Heres one more:


Lies

A truth is never trusted,
when spoken from a liar
The night is on fire
with wings of desire

So guide my through this darkest of wire
for when the day comes our time must expire
Every heart seeks the truth but how can it
trust the mouth of a would be liar

So lies upon lies
as your heart in disguise for when you see
truth your heart leaps like fireflys
So tell me please no more lies

 

[foray]

Re: Sunrise

How much long will this last
I hear the ocean crash beneath me

foray

 

[adamswildhoney]

I see that i made some mistakes on reading over my poems, aww well they are works in progress!








900

 

[Bonochick]

Re: Sunrise

This poem is about my grandmas trip to america!

How beautiful!

 

[adamswildhoney]

I Remember You


I remember the walks in the rain
and talks of the sea
Hearing your voice always made me sing
and see you always made beam

I remember the days of planning our get away
and yet we always managed to stay
The day that you left my heart felt weak
and i couldnt speak for you were the one for me

I remember you
oh yes, I do
Do you remember me
oh no for you would come back to me
days fly by like freight trains
But one thing still remains

I Remember You

 

[adamswildhoney]

Lies

Okay here is everyone, Ive been working on this poem for awhile and i think that i finally finished it. I had posted an early version of it before but heres what i think is the finshed version



Lies

A truth is never trusted,
when spoken from a liar
The night is on fire
with wings of desire

So guide my through this darkest of wire
for when the day comes our time must expire
Every heart seeks the truth but how can it
trust the mouth of a would be liar

So lies upon lies
as your heart in disguise for when you see
truth your heart leaps like fireflies
So tell me please no more lies

That glimmer in your eyes tries to hide the
truth that will not lie
Why must we act like this?
My hearts yearns for days of bliss

To seal the lies with a kiss
wont help me to dismiss the lies that exist
A broken heart is never healed by a hand that
conceals the love of another

Lies hurt the innocent and make the guilty happy
So tired am I of the lies of loves
for when will truth ever be the best thing for the heart to sing

Lies go around like a firefly
Fly away lie for no more I deny the story
you told me so many times



I just want to know what ppl think of it and if you have any suggestions feel free to offer them!

 

[Jim Morrison]

Re: Lies

Lies hurt the innocent and make the guilty happy
So tired am I of the lies of loves
for when will truth ever be the best thing for the heart to sing

Lies go around like a firefly
Fly away lie for no more I deny the story
you told me so many times

Melike-- er.......deep My feast of friends and I enjoy these parts especially.

 

[MissVelvetDress_75]

nice poem. i like it.

 

[foray]

I liked it, too.

foray

 

[ghetofabu]

I liked the whole thing but I think this part is my fav. Bad ass.

The night is on fire
with wings of desire

 

[adamswildhoney]

some more

Scared

So scared to be what I want to be
you see me floundering
in a sea of nothing

I fear that I would disappoint you if I tried
to really be me
Why cant you just see the real me
You live the way you wanted to live
without trying to give




....................


No Chance

They said that it couldnt be done
that she wouldnt live so why are they so wrong
You tried to tell us that she wouldnt be able to be
what we wanted her to be
But here you see in front of you a beauty like no other
you discover that there is no cover
for it was all just a mystery

No chance we gave her no chance
Just a glance but no chance
Why must that be
No chance

There was a chance that
she would okay but no one knew for sure
you said take a chance but there's no chance


...................


Okay here are 2 more that im working on!

 

[ACROB@T]

So scared to be what I want to be
you see me floundering
in a sea of nothing

They said that it couldnt be done
that she wouldnt live so why are they so wrong
You tried to tell us that she wouldnt be able to be
what we wanted her to be

There was a chance that
she would okay but no one knew for sure
you said take a chance but there's no chance

 

[famous rungi]

I read your other ones, too. Your poems are very heartfelt.

 

[adamswildhoney]

Late Nite

LATE NITE


I LIE A WAKE AT NITE
WONDERING WHAT TOMMORROW WILL BRING
THIS CONSTANT PONDERING SENDS MY MIND
WANDERING

WILL I HAVE THE STRENGTH TO LIVE WITH THE
CHOICES I DECIDE

LATE NITE
NO WHERE TO RUN
NO WHERE TO HIDE
FROM THE THOUGHTS THAT ARE INSIDE

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

ILLUSIONS

REALITY IS SUCH A FASCADE
WE TURN TO FALSITY TO MAKE US HAPPY
BUT WHEN REALITY SINKS IN ITS ONLY JUST BEGUN


ILLISION LEADS THE MIND AWAY
FOR WHAT YOU SAY CANT BE THE WAY

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

to be cont<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

 

[FallingStar]

Wow, that is great.

*waits for continuation

And it made me sad.

 

[adamswildhoney]

Leaving Ireland/ Religion Hurts

As I walk past all these sights
I can see all the bloody fights
My world is collapsing all around me
im leaving on a boat never to return

Constant visions of what will be
terrifies me more than you can see
Could it be any worse then what i have already seen
constant news of bombings
No more Night raids
No more Bombs
No more ringing
No more blood fights

Please no more
No more
I just want to be safe
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Wake up, there's been another bomb
this time its 10 injured last time it was 13
when will it stop?

I dont believe in religion
religion kills and hurts
no more pain
when will we realize we are all the same?

You say you belong here I say so do I
then why can't we see eye to eye?

Religion
war of words
war of bombs
war of pain
war of no gains

 

[FallingStar]

That is beaufiful.

 

[adamswildhoney]

thanks!!

 

[adamswildhoney]

Glad you like them!!

 

[adamswildhoney]

*bump*

 

[adamswildhoney]

thankyou