Loves Grasp

[Brandon]

Warm hands carving a frigid soul
Forming a intimate beauty,
That has yet to be known
Hands flowing like the sea
Creating a current inside
The waves bring love
The winds bring fear
She sees inside him,
A storm is raging
His soul surrounded,
by darkened clouds,
A foregoing affection gone sour
Hands radiating through obscurity
Faith leading the Incursion,
Like the congregation that believes the priest
She takes a lunge into his soul,
and uncovers a brilliance of passion,
that has been eternally concealed
With a declaration of commitment,
she frees it.
Pain, love, neglect, sorrow, bliss
from this act, harmony emerges,
and they are united.
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Copyright Brandon T 11/04/01

 

[Marla's Little Secret]

Brandon,
beautiful.
I love the whole poem, but especially the first three lines.

 

[BabyGrace]

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Win together today and we walk together forever.
-Fred Shero

 

[tchlowlife]

I really loved the flow of this piece brandon, the words that you use are like waves that flow and ebb over the reader.. it is a wonderful poem!!!

 

[foray]

Brandon, that was brilliant. I'm struggling to think of the word to describe it...

(2 minutes later)
DIGNIFIED!

yes that was it. Thanks.
foray

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From the cowardice that dares not face new truth, From the laziness that is contented with half-truth, From the arrogance that does not want truth, My God, deliver me. -- African prayer.