Look I actually wrote a poem by myself in about 5 mins..The Looking Glass....plz read

[bono-vox]

Ok no thumbs down, but before you all think it's bad im 16, have never written a poem and typed this up in about 5 mins, please be nice. *purr*

Your words, those words are ringing in my ears,
Look through, Look through the looking glass and tell me what you see?
Your unblemished soul,
Your heart,
You wear it on your sleeve,
For everyone to see,
And your soul is nothing...
You killed it, you killed me,
Look through, look through the looking glass and tell me what you see?

 

[scatteroflight]

Originally posted by bono-vox:

Your unblemished soul,
Your heart,
You wear it on your sleeve,
For everyone to see,
And your soul is nothing...

The thumbs up definitely gives a better first impression than the thumbs down

I really like this poem! The contrast with first "your unblemished soul" and then "your soul is nothing" is quite chilling.



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One day we'd reach the great ocean
At the end of a pale afternoon
And we'd lay down our heads just like we were sleeping
And be towed by the drag of the moon

-Sting