life is fucked how are you

[zooropamanda]

what
what u want heady fucked up world
cmon come get me
im waiting for the slice
over and under a bottomless fidget
is it your head
that i hear exploding
like a bulletwish skidding at me
bones and veins ready to jump from their cage
to swim into the malign air and
under bridges built on songs
until they become breathless and starved

but wait
maybe they can catch some of the falling green train
go on
go get some
rip a family apart
wipe your feet on their skin
i dare you

 

[Solar Supernova]

Well, its hard for me to really know what to say about this. Its effective, how about that? I think it would make an interesting self-depreciating pop song. And thats not a bad thing at all.

Good honest writing, Amanda. Just sorry to hear your inspiration doesnt appear to be very bright at the moment. :S

 

[bono_man]

heavy...

u ok?

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"we're free to fly the crimson sky...the sun won't melt our wings tonight..."

 

[brettig]

i dare you

reminds me of another poet who once graced these halls...

 

[foray]

Your spontaneous angry poetry is sooo much more better than mine. *jealous*

foray

 

[The Wanderer]

i like this a great deal, very intense and confrontational

 

[U2002revolution!]

life is fucked

agree.

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' I want to run
I want to hide
I want to tear down the walls
That hold me inside
I want to reach out
And touch the flame
Where the streets have no name. . .'
.:. U2: Rock's Unbreakable Heart!

Love is...cold steel/Fingers too numb to feel/Squeeze the handle/Blow out the candle
Love is blindness.../A little death/Without mourning/No call/And no warning...

[Thanks M.P.]

 

[zooropamanda]

Originally posted by foray:
Your spontaneous angry poetry is sooo much more better than mine. *jealous*

foray

Im that see thru huh?
hehe
yeah it took about 2 minutes of angry music charged spitting out of words to leave this mess here.

 

[BabyGrace]

powerful Manda