"kiss"

[Flood & The Mercury Acid]

kiss

the weeping flowers
spilling their bloom

cryptic vices
as gravity swoons

would you like to taste,
the world on her tongue?

kisses at night
beneath the stars

now you belong
to them all

here's to the atom bomb...

 

[zooropamanda]

God I love writing that confuses the hell out of me!

 

[zooropamanda]

shhh
i think better actually

 

[BabyGrace]

*whispers*

yes, but if i said that then he definitely wouldnt listen!

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but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

 

[Flood & The Mercury Acid]

well the italicized portion is actually a song by the Smashing Pumpkins which inspired this poem, I put that line in there at the end to totally distort the poem and reconstructed a couple of lines from the song to make the ending lines of this

anyway, thanks for your comments, I don't know how accurate they are, but I am truly humbled and honored to even be mentioned in the same breath as Billy Corgan

thank you

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no one could spell you out
in the grass at night
beneath the stars...

a little piece of heaven is all you seek

no one can know your song
in kisses and noise
now you belong to them all

 

[BabyGrace]

this reminds me of Billy Corgan?s writing..for some reason I recognize the last bit, i don?t know if that?s part of a song but all i really wanted to say is:

you are just as powerful a poet as he, even if you won?t believe it

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but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...