Inside out

[my_kite]

Storm blows strong in my mind
Rain falls trough my eyes
While dark clouds surrender to abandoned skies

Feel me falling fast
Laying in sheets full of holes
Just one body, two tired souls

I hope these eyes can see the sun rise again
I beg heaven to take me off, to never let land
Lights are fading but the night is still to come
Faith is gone, no hope
This is too much for me to cope

Love must be poison
‘Cus he tastes so bitter
Like an old gum, that you chew
And then you’re sick enough to spit her
Ache is burning, like acid in my mouth
It makes me scream and shout
It swallows me
And it throws me out
It turns me inside out

Some search for love in the church
For care and affection
They ask the lord for protection

But can’t you see them
They are falling, they are falling
Brought to their knees they are crawling

I hope the moon can come and light the night again
I look above…somehow I hope HE understands
The inner struggle, it has been turning me around
I know I’m acting wrong
But I don’t know how to be strong

Love must be poison
‘Cus he tastes so bitter
Like an old gum, that you chew
And then you’re sick enough to spit her
Fire, flames inside me
I forgot what I’m supposed to be
It confuses me
It leaves me in doubt
It turns me inside out

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Great, Tania! I feel like that sometimes too.Just one body, two tired souls~I like that line and also~Some search for love in the church
For care and affection
They ask the lord for protection
But can’t you see them
They are falling, they are falling
Brought to their knees they are crawling
I love how you express how you feel, you got something special in your writings.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

To me, you are going in the right direction, you can show people that "the only limits are imagination."

 

[my_kite]

Hi Cute...Thanks!!
After I wrote and read this...I said to myself...'Oh...this is so 'Carly'!!
You know what I mean?? After all the talking on God, on humans, on suffering...bittersweet felings are all around...!!

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

I know what you mean, thanks. Did my poem "God Were Only Humans" maybe give you an idea of your own?

 

[TheBrazilianFly]

Great poem my_kite.

 

[my_kite]

Thanks FLY..... you know?

A man will beg, a man, from the cheer face of love, like a FLY on the wall....it's no secret at all!!!! I love that tune