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Rock n' Roll Doggie
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Location: manchester
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In Time
Ok, this is my first song i wrote and it pretty much came to me within 20 mins. Honest opinions are very much welcome.
__________________---------------- You’re the queen of our sincerity The individual guarding my complexity The darkness locking my honesty The cannon besieging my embassy Its time That gives us this grace Its time The one true leader of the human race Its time That will keep it in place Its time Its my one true voice that will break us in Light behind my violin Our Temptation is not a sin Love kills all its believes in Its time That gives us this grace Its time The one true leader of the human race Its time That will keep it in place Its time Its hope and love that believe in me Time killed our community It’s our insanity that will set us free And our mercy that will feed upon me Its time That gives us this grace Its time The one true leader of the human race Its time That will keep it in place Its time Its this moment that im in Blue white waves that im drowning in Hells own embers that im fearing in God lord help us Im repenting In Time In Time In Time ----------------------------- Im going to change some things but i would like some feed back now, just for a confidence boost really. |
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Rock n' Roll Doggie
ALL ACCESS Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: manchester
Posts: 7,447
Local Time: 06:55 PM
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Its time
That takes us here Its time Love, will keep us near Its time The revolutions here Its time That will, take us from here Its time New Chorus |
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