I can tell that we are gonna be friends

[The Wanderer]

come and be with me
it won't be forever
cause I don't know where that is

pack up your things
write a few notes
we'll play them to the breeze

you're not ready
to be a wife
that's ok cause I'm not good enough

let's walk awhile in the park
hold hands and be alone till dark
smile and don't say a word
I know it's all laughingly absurd

and I can see,
that we are gonna be friends.

so come with me,
on to where forever ends.


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~I have to credit borrowing the title from a White Stripes song

 

[famous rungi]

I love it

come and be with me
it won't be forever
cause I don't know where that is

--so true, so true.

 

[Stories for Boys]

one of my favorites thus far....very well written, wanderer

 

[BabyGrace]

beautiful and clear

 

[bono_man]

i dont come in here very much now. for some reason i did tonite and read this. it describes my state of mind this week perfectly. thank you

 

[sharry_lt]

it's very well written, easy to read (I mean the words fit one to another). you are a great poet!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

 

[brettig]

I just bookmarked this poem.

yep it struck that much of a chord with moi.

 

[popkidu2]

yup.

nice one Wanderer.

 

[The Wanderer]

thanks guys

 

[Alisaura]

oh man, Wanderer... besides being a great poem, I think you just wrote my life at the moment... scary.

take a peek in Zoo confessional... maybe I'm just reading my life into your poem, but it fits so closely.

 

[Cowgirl]

this one always made me feel too much
and sometimes that can be hard