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Old 12-08-2002, 12:46 AM   #1
love, blood, life
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heres a poem of mine this time instead of a song!!

all these feelings are bunch inside,
and ready to go on a joy ride.

I try to let it just slip by
no wants to go
everyone has to face it someday
but no one wants see the hurt that it will bring,
First you must watch your life slowly
tick away with the second's hand.

Will there be pain or just silence?
no one knows which way it's bound to go.

Death and Dying
all everyone does is cry,
no one knows why we got to go?

One day we are here the next day we gone
never to see our loves grow,
will we see the people of our past?


Who will be on trial?
will we be granted a pardon?
or just given a hug from the one above?

No one can say for sure
we believe in you, Oh yes we do
So will our envisions come true.

They say let it flow like a river, all the hurt that you feel.
Many of us want to just conceal the hurt that is so very real.

Death and Dying
no more crying
just remembering the loves gone before.

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Old 12-09-2002, 08:29 AM   #2
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I really like this!
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