hell within

[The Wanderer]

empty spaces
burnt out of the sky
a shreader of stars

fill them with wretched rage
more nothingness
to complete the phase

want some?
let me jam the bones in your skull
let me bash them all to dust

build a cage for me
to keep you alive
and shut in hell

maybe I'll join you
for a bit of the romance
until i give birth

to more empty spaces
a place for you to crawl inside
and burry US

 

[brettig]

build a cage for me
to keep you alive
and shut in hell

Powerful, powerful image that provokes...

This poem feels focused and ambiguous all at once. Something great stuff does.

no matter if its US or us.

 

[Jett]

very bold and heartfelt

 

[BabyGrace]

hang in there, I know how you feel, we're all in it together

your poem..unbelievable. how you can so tangibly express these feelings..
thanks, Wanderer

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but for the grace of love I'd will the meaning of heaven from above...

 

[Salome]

Originally posted by The Wanderer:
maybe I'll join you
for a bit of the romance
until i give birth

to more empty spaces
a place for you to crawl inside
and burry US

you do get better and better Wanderer

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Salome
Shake it, shake it, shake it