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popkidu2

War Child
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Half a mile from what she said...
Fire
Hold it in your hand
Wires
Threaded cross the land
Nothing
Can make it ever right
Water
See it dancing in the light

And I can't make you dissapear
And I can't let you know

Waiting
To feel it pushing back at you
Haunted
Never knowing what to do
Taste it
Let it sit beneath your tongue
Forever
Dying younger at the gun

And I can't make you dissapear
And I can't let you know
And I can't make you dissapear
And I can't let you know
 
Wonderful, popkid! I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this one. I was going to try to pick lines I liked the best but they're all quoteable and beautiful.

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**Still looking for the
face I had before the
world was made....**

**Work like you don't
need money, love like
you've never been hurt,
and dance like no
one's watching.**
 
Yes, I like this one.

Simple yet strong.
I like the way you've structured the lines
"Fire
Hold it in your hand"

Very strong opener

Cool
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Originally posted by popkidu2:
Fire
Hold it in your hand
Wires
Threaded cross the land
Nothing
Can make it ever right
Water
See it dancing in the light

Is this a song? I can almost hear the music. I love it!
 
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