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[ghetofabu]

Flesh from my heart yours
ripping from my breast
on my knees
bloodied and waiting
ready for the next
waiting
ready
wanting it
feeling no pain
embracing it
do it to me
against the wall
fuck me
love me
kill me
hurt me
I am ready
ready for you

 

[BabyGrace]

Flesh from my heart yours
ripping from my breast
on my knees
bloodied and waiting
ready for the next
waiting



powerful, gheto

 

[The Wanderer]

intense imagery, it's refreshing to see something as bold as this from time to time, though I can't say it's my favorite style of writing, it does have its place, and this is good! thanks for posting it.

 

[Zoomerang96]

very bold.

i think writing poetry is hard enough but to be this flat out about it is incredible.

nicely done.

 

[ghetofabu]

I think there are some feelings that are very good poetic fuels.

 

[Bonochick]

powerful, gheto

"Powerful" was the first word that came to mind for me.

 

[zooropamanda]

yes
sometimes simple statements can have much more strength than a fluffy monologue.
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