04-06-2002, 07:49 AM
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Rock n' Roll Doggie
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Grand Canyon Girl
She is the Grand Canyon girl
__________________open and expansive tourists in line with their cash in hand they marvel at her beauty a river flows through coarsing white rapids that bring life or death makes no difference to the Grand Canyon Girl =========== It's a work in process =========== ------------------ Daisy Uncertainty...it can be a guiding light AIM: daisyone75 |
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04-06-2002, 03:32 PM
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that 2nd stanza is really so true, isn't it? I'm interested to see what else you will add to this daisy, if you choose to do so that is
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04-06-2002, 04:19 PM
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a river flows through
coarsing white rapids that bring life or death ..look forward to more if you add to it 
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04-12-2002, 12:20 AM
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Rock n' Roll Doggie
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Yes I like the way you describe the "grand canyon girl"
I would like to read the rest if you add more. Thanks for sharing it Daisy
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