Gloomy poems. . . [["The Only Words I Write" & "The Dying Of The Light"]]

[U2002revolution!]

...by yours truly:

"The Only Words I Write"

Forgive me...
I couldn't stay
It hurt too much to feel this way

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"The Dying Of The Light"

We all grow up
With dreams, wanting to achieve
Hoping the world holds something for us
The light we try and reach
Soon the light dims
Push on
No right to give up
It hurts
Push on
The fortunate ones
Oh, they live
Prosper
Have a happy life
But others suffer
No one there to truly understand
Just wonder through life
No reason
Throughout each season
The dying of the light we see
The unfortunate ones
Why?

-

"Nothing Left"

My eyes are bloodshot and icy cold
Don't try to appeal to my emotions
For I no longer have any
It is true I cry
But they are only tears
Tears of frustration
For I feel no more
Love...
No such thing
Just fantasy bullshit is what it is
Oh no,
Don't mistake me
For I do care
Or atleast I use to
After awhile it just hurt too much
So I just let go of what I used to know

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"Rage (Eyes)"

I ask you
Do you see anything
See anything behind these eyes
These angry eyes
There is no longer anything
Behind
These eyes
Soul-less eyes
All I feel is
All I feel is rage
For the drugs make me this way
Forcast for the future. . .

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' I want to run
I want to hide
I want to tear down the walls
That hold me inside
I want to reach out
And touch the flame
Where the streets have no name. . .'
.:. U2: Rock's Unbreakable Heart!

Love is...cold steel/Fingers too numb to feel/Squeeze the handle/Blow out the candle
Love is blindness.../A little death/Without mourning/No call/And no warning...

[Thanks M.P.]

 

[foray]

They're all very heartfelt... I like the first poem the best. That's my personal preference. I hope you feel better and continue to write poems. Take care,

foray

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so bounce, basketball, bounce

 

[zooropamanda]

I like the final one the best.
Something about the simple lines is effective. Makes me want to know more about what's happening.

 

[ACROB@T]

the third one is incredibly heartfelt and very moving..hope all is ok..