Girl

[Headache in a Suitcase]

I saw this girl I used to know
Dark straight brown hair
Hazel eyes
Lips that you just need to taste
Legs
Long
Long
Legs
We talks
Rather she talks
I just listen
And stare
I need to have her
Along comes this kid that I used to know
Blonde hair
He looks about as dumb as he is
He kisses the girl
They?re going out
My day has just been ruined

 

[IWasBored]

there's something about the way that that flows that i really like

 

[The Wanderer]

Lips that you just need to taste
Legs
Long
Long
Legs
We talks
Rather she talks

~ah yes, great scene. very nice touch...

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

 

[Headache in a Suitcase]

thank ya'... but that's supposed to be "we talk" not "we talks"

stupid typo moment

 

[The Wanderer]

oh yeah? i thought you did it on purpose, kind of implying that you're stumbling over words while talking to her because... well, Long Long Legs and whatnot, makes sense either way

 

[foray]

mm
long
long
long
legs

I likes.


foray

 

[Ana]

I like the typo thingie

 

[Headache in a Suitcase]

welllll if everyone likes it... especialy thouse of a female persuasion... i just might keep the typo

 

[IWasBored]

i like the type-o

 

[hiphop]

I didn?t expect you?d make a poem out of it.

 

[diamond]

headache-
im glad u didnt write "she barks"

thank u
diamond

 

[Headache in a Suitcase]

hehe